I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.I hope to tomorrow completely finish my science project.No revision is necessary.
The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. No revision is necessary.
Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.
The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. ✔ No revision is necessary.
X She encouraged the dancers to energetically and gracefully perform the routine, also confidently.✔ She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.No revision is necessary.
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Which sentence must be revised to eliminate the preposition at the end?
Which statement best explains why a writer might revise the second sentence to use passive voice rather than active voice?
Which revision to the second sentence of the passage changes active voice to passive voice?
Which sentences contain split infinitives? Check all that apply.I hope to quickly finish the worksheets so that I can study for the quiz.To get the most out of the class, you should plan to attend all the field trips.We would like to go to a movie over the weekend.Olivia and Jayson plan to compete in the chess tournament.The dancers must take time to completely warm up before the performance.
Which sentence best emphasizes the idea that one should eat a good breakfast before school every single day?
The life jackets are stored below the deck.
Which sentence must be revised to eliminate the preposition at the end?
Cassidy does not know for which course she will register.How could a writer best revise the above sentence to avoid overly formal language?
What do you call the sandwich in the picture?
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Read each sentence and determine which revision, if any, makes the sentence stronger and clearer.
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