What is a more effective way to state this feedback?I disagree with your claim. You should change it.Your claim would be stronger if you gave statistical evidence to support it.I created a cool chart to summarize the reasons that support my claim.Your claim won’t appeal to many people in the audience.
Answer
A
I disagree with your claim. You should change it.
B
Your claim would be stronger if you gave statistical evidence to support it.
C
I created a cool chart to summarize the reasons that support my claim.
D
Your claim won’t appeal to many people in the audience.
Explanation
Effective feedback is specific and gives the writer a useful way to improve. Saying the claim would be stronger with statistical evidence identifies what is missing and how to support the claim. The other choices are vague, dismissive, or focus on what the feedback-giver did rather than helping improve the claim.
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