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AssignmentMultiple Choice

Choosing Precise Words to Eliminate Wordiness and Redundancy

Question 8 • SS-English Language Arts 7

Which changes should the writer make to improve the word choices in this sentence without including too much detail?

Answer
A
Add descriptive details about the ducks, the fish, and the walk.
B
Explain what the ducks and fish were doing.
C
Replace the verbs with vivid verbs.
D
Replace the nouns with more precise nouns.
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