Contested Usage

Question 1

Which statement best explains why a writer might revise the second sentence to use passive voice rather than active voice?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

The writer does not know the name of the person who painted the mural.

Question 2

The usher asked us to proceed carefully to the exit.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

No revision is necessary.

Question 3

She encouraged the dancers to energetically, gracefully, and confidently perform the routine.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.

Question 4

I hope to tomorrow finish my science project.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.

Question 5

Which sentence best emphasizes the idea that one should eat a good breakfast before school every single day?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

Mom says that it is best to always eat a good breakfast before school.

Question 6

The life jackets are stored below the deck.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

below

Question 7

Cassidy does not know for which course she will register.How could a writer best revise the above sentence to avoid overly formal language?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

Cassidy does not know which course she will register for.

Question 8

I hope to visit my grandmother on Wednesday.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

on

Question 9

If you walk across the bridge, you will see two windmills.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

across

Contested Usage Answers