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Correct Modifiers and Concise Wording — Quiz

Question 11 • English III

Read the sentence. Drying its wings by the pool, Sarah saw a wet bee. What is the best way to revise this sentence?

Answer
A
Sarah saw a wet bee drying its wings by the pool.
B
The sentence is correct as written.
C
A bee by the pool was seen by Sarah drying its wings.
D
Sarah saw a wet bee, by the pool, trying to dry its wet wings.

Explanation

The opening phrase “Drying its wings by the pool” should describe the bee, not Sarah. Choice C puts the bee next to the phrase describing its action: “Sarah saw a wet bee drying its wings by the pool.”

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