Read the sentence.When we returned to school after summer vacation, our teacher asked us to be prepared to share about our summer activities. Mark told us about his amazing visit to the Great Wall of China on Friday.What is the best way to revise the underlined sentence?
Answer
A
Mark told us about his amazing visit on Friday to the Great Wall of China.
B
On Friday, Mark told us about his amazing visit to the Great Wall of China.
C
His amazing visit to the Great Wall of China on Friday, Mark told us about it.
D
The sentence is correct as written.
Explanation
The phrase “on Friday” tells when Mark told the class about his visit, so it should be placed at the beginning of the sentence to make that meaning clear. “On Friday, Mark told us about his amazing visit to the Great Wall of China” is clear and natural. Choice A could make it sound as though the visit itself happened on Friday.
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