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QuizMultiple Choice

Correct Modifiers and Concise Wording

Question 25 • DBN LA 6-CR

Read the sentence.The failing company was not going to succeed because it was bankrupt and did not have any money left.What is the best way to revise this sentence to eliminate wordiness?

Answer
A
The company was failing because it was bankrupt and did not have enough money left.
B
The company was failing and not succeeding because it was out of money.
C
The failing company was going bankrupt.
D
The sentence is correct as written.

Explanation

The sentence repeats the idea of failure by saying the company was “failing” and “not going to succeed.” Choice A removes that repetition and keeps the reason: the company was bankrupt and lacked money. Choice B still repeats the idea of failure, while C changes the meaning by saying the company was going bankrupt rather than already being bankrupt.

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