What is the best revision of sentence 4?I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a wire could use the sun’s rays to make a fan spin.I began by using a solar cell and a simple wire powered by the sun’s rays to use the sun’s power and make a fan spin.Using a simple wire and a solar cell, I began by showing how to use the sun’s powerful rays to make a fan spin.
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What kinds of errors does this paragraph contain? Check all of the boxes that apply.Capitalization errorsDangling modifiersMisplaced modifiersRedundanciesSubject-verb disagreementsTroublesome modifiersWordiness
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Review the model paragraph. How many of the same revisions did you make?I made all of the same revisions.I made most of the same revisions.I made some of the same revisions.I made none of the same revisions.
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