What is the best revision of sentence 4?I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a wire could use the sun’s rays to make a fan spin.I began by using a solar cell and a simple wire powered by the sun’s rays to use the sun’s power and make a fan spin.Using a simple wire and a solar cell, I began by showing how to use the sun’s powerful rays to make a fan spin.
Which is the best revision of sentence 1?
What kinds of errors does this paragraph contain? Check all of the boxes that apply.Capitalization errorsDangling modifiersMisplaced modifiersRedundanciesSubject-verb disagreementsTroublesome modifiersWordiness
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