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QuizMultiple Choice

Correct Modifiers and Concise Wording

Question 10 • DBN LA 6-CR

Read the paragraph.Patty and Maureen took the long drive to their high school reunion. The women were excited about the prospect of seeing old friends at the ranch. The group had quite a past history to reminisce about. The weekend was sure to be full of stories and laughter!Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?

Answer
A
Sentence 1
B
Sentence 2
C
Sentence 3
D
Sentence 4

Explanation

Sentence 3 says “past history,” but history refers to events from the past, so “past” repeats an idea already contained in “history.” Revise it to say “The group had quite a history to reminisce about.”

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