What is the best revision of the troublesome modifier in sentence 5?okay✔ badworse
What is the best revision of the error in sentence 1? “gold watch of a man”✔ “man’s gold watch”“man’s watch of gold”
Choose the best revision of the error in sentence 4 by completing the sentence.Looking at the gold links on the band, …
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What kinds of errors does this paragraph contain? Check all of the boxes that apply.
Identify the types of errors you corrected.
Review the model paragraph. How many of the same revisions did you make?I made all of the same revisions.I made most of the same revisions.I made some of the same revisions.I made none of the same revisions.
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