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Which revision would best improve the connections between ideas and the flow of the paragraph?

adding a fact to improve the logic of sentence 2

moving sentence 3 to the end of the paragraph

adding a transitional phrase to sentence 4

using an analogy to describe a restaurant in sentence 5

Which revision best improves the formality of the paragraph?

using the contraction “aren’t” for “are not” in sentence 1

breaking up sentence 2 into several short sentences

replacing “popular” with “top” in sentence 3

replacing “cooler” with “more dramatic” in sentence 4

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