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Writing a Narrative about Overcoming a Challenge

Question 1 • EN091 Freshman English A

I walked home in the rain.

Answer
A
After school ended, I walked home in the rain with a friend of mine.
B
It was raining a lot when I walked home from school with my friend.
C
The freezing rain stung my skin as I briskly walked home from school.

Explanation

Choice C adds the most vivid descriptive detail: the rain is “freezing,” it “stung” the speaker’s skin, and the speaker walked “briskly.” These specific sensory details make the sentence more vivid than the general information in A or B.

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