an encyclopedia entry about Abraham Lincoln
a speech about improving human rights around the world
an essay about the author's difficulties in moving to a new town
Which of these opening lines is the strongest for a personal narrative?
How can you tell that this passage is from the end of the personal narrative?
I sat at my desk waiting to give my speech. I was nervous. I started to think about what had happened the last time I gave a speech.
The last time, it did not go well! I stumbled over my words, my face turned all red, and my hands shook.
"Erin!" I snapped to attention. The teacher was calling my name. It was my turn! I hoped that this time, things would go better.
The events are told out of order. What effect does this have on the story?
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