Read the excerpt from a summary of the Declaration of Independence.[1] The Declaration of Independence is beautifully written. [2] Jefferson argues that everyone has the right to life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. [3] It is a government’s job to protect these rights. [4] When a government fails, Jefferson asserts that the people can overthrow their government.Which sentence should be revised to make this summary more objective?
Sentence 1 should be revised because “beautifully written” is a subjective opinion, not a neutral summary of the Declaration. The other sentences describe Jefferson’s arguments about rights, government, and the people’s power to overthrow a government.
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