Read through the passage, and decide whether each sentence is written in a parallel structure. If not, correct the sentence with a choice from the drop-down menu.
Correct as is.✔ Change to “my father muttered instructions.”Change to “instructions muttered my father.”
✔ Correct as is.Change “checked” to “checking.”Change “crept” to “creeping.”
Read through the passage, and decide whether each sentence is written in a parallel structure. If not, correct the sentence with a choice from the drop-down menu.
How could you rewrite sentence 2 to include a nonrestrictive element?
coordinating conjunction✔ subordinating conjunction
What is the effect of the coordinating conjunction in the second sentence?
Look at the model highlighting. How much of your highlighting matches the model?allmostsomenone
What is the effect of Henry’s parallelism in this passage?
✔ coordinating conjunctionsubordinating conjunction
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