Read a sentence from Lucia's essay.Sibling dynamics in competitive environments can significantly impact personal growth and self-perception, as illustrated by Andrés and Daniel's experiences in basketball.Which revision makes Lucia's sentence more precise?

“Competitive environments” and “personal growth and self-perception” are already fairly specific, but the sentence does not explain how Andrés and Daniel’s experiences differ. Adding “contrasting” makes that relationship clearer and more precise. The revision “as illustrated by Andrés and Daniel’s contrasting experiences” is therefore the best choice.

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