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QuizMultiple Choice

Planning and Writing an Effective Informational Essay

Question 7 • ELA 10B - 2023

Read Maya's thesis statement.Success is best done with hard work, leading you to grow emotionally and get a sense of achievement.Which revision best improves her statement's effectiveness?

Answer
A
Success is most fulfilling when achieved by hard work, as it builds character, instills a sense of accomplishment, and provides lasting satisfaction.
B
When a person grows emotionally and can feel a sense of achievement in something they worked on, then they will feel the hard work was worth it.
C
Success leads to emotional growth when you succeed in completing hard work.
D
Hard work leads to the most fulfilling success a person can feel.

Explanation

A strong thesis should express a clear, focused claim and give the main reasons that support it. Choice A states that success is most fulfilling when achieved through hard work and identifies three results: building character, creating accomplishment, and providing lasting satisfaction. The other choices are less effective because they are vaguer or do not clearly develop the relationship between hard work and success.

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