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QuizMultiple Choice

Planning and Writing Effective Correspondence

Question 1 • ELA 10B - 2023

Read a sentence from Jacquie's letter.The narrator learned many things about history during the cooking class.Which revision makes Jacquie's sentence more precise?

Answer
A
During the cooking class, the narrator gained insights into the history of food and its cultural significance.
B
The narrator thought cooking class was interesting because it connected to history on multiple occasions.
C
In class, the narrator learned a few things about how food relates to history.
D
The narrator learned some important facts about the past in cooking class.

Explanation

A is more precise because it explains what the narrator learned about history: the history of food and its cultural significance. The other choices use vague phrases such as “many things,” “a few things,” or “some important facts,” without specifying the subject of the learning.

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