Read this sentence from an informative essay. The Neolithic Revolution led to increased food supplies. This sentence could be improved by including

The sentence makes a broad claim: the Neolithic Revolution increased food supplies. Adding relevant facts, such as how farming and animal domestication produced more food, would support and clarify that claim. A thesis states an essay’s main argument, and transitions connect ideas, so neither directly improves this sentence.

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