The best way to revise sentence 1 is to add and after the comma✔ add but after the commadelete the comma.
The best way to revise sentence 3 is to add but after readadd a comma after values✔ add a semicolon after read.
Overall, the fluency is best described as
What is the best way to rewrite sentence 2?
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The sentence length is generally ✔ longshortvaried.
The sentence structures used are repetitive✔ varied.
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