Question 6 • IC English 12 - Deering
Mario’s personal experience makes the argument relatable, but one person’s experience does not establish that a helmet law would benefit cyclists generally. He should support it with well-researched facts as well, such as evidence about how helmets reduce impact injuries. That makes D, balancing the personal example with factual examples, the strongest revision; adding more personal stories alone would still leave the argument short on broader evidence.
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