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Writing a Personal Narrative that Expresses Your Identity — Unit test

Question 6 • SS-English Language Arts 7

Read the sentence.Emily ate popcorn while she watched the movie in her living room about President Lincoln.Which is the best revision of this sentence?

Answer
A
About President Lincoln, Emily ate popcorn while she watched the movie in her living room.
B
Emily ate popcorn in her living room while she watched a movie about President Lincoln.
C
While she watched the movie in her living room about President Lincoln Emily ate popcorn.
D
Watching the movie, Emily ate popcorn in her living room about President Lincoln.

Explanation

The original sentence makes it sound as though the living room is about President Lincoln. Choice B places “about President Lincoln” next to “movie,” making clear what the movie is about. It also keeps the details in a natural, easy-to-follow order: Emily ate popcorn in her living room while watching the movie.

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