Read the student thesis.Parents should, if they choose, limit the amount of television their children are viewing.The best way to improve this thesis is to

A thesis should clearly state the writer’s position. The phrase “if they choose” weakens the claim and makes it unclear what the writer believes about limiting children’s television viewing. A stronger thesis would express a definite viewpoint, so the best choice is “provide a clearly expressed viewpoint.”

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