Read the excerpt from a student’s essay.As Rainsford enters the dining room, he immediately becomes aware of Zaroff’s expensive and sophisticated taste. He notes the decorations, the food, the drink, all of which are exquisite and advertise Zaroff’s privileged aristocratic upbringing. Rainsford is initially impressed by the general’s home and finds him to be a "thoughtful and affable host.”
Answer
A
adding some of the dialogue between Rainsford and Zaroff.
B
adding that Rainsford comes from a privileged background as well.
C
adding that the residence is situated on a wild overgrown island.
D
adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink.
Explanation
The paragraph claims that Zaroff’s home shows his expensive, sophisticated taste, but it gives only a general mention of the decorations, food, and drink. Adding more specific descriptions of those things would provide evidence for the claim and make the analysis stronger. Choice D, a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink, best supports the paragraph’s focus.
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