Read the sentence from a student’s critical analysis essay.In the Declaration of Independence, Thomas Jefferson talks about independence through his use of big words and fancy argument skills.Which is the best revision to the sentence?

A strong revision should use precise, formal language and clearly explain how Jefferson’s writing supports independence. Choice B does this by describing his command of English as a way to make a powerful argument for American independence. The other choices use awkward or informal wording, such as “big words,” “fanciful words,” or “talks using.”

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