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Question 11 • Honors English III

Read the sentence. While she slept the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear. According to The Elements of Style , what is the correct way to revise this sentence?

Answer
A
While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear.
B
The alarm kept ringing while she slept in Jamie's ear.
C
The alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear, while she slept.
D
no change

Explanation

The opening clause, “While she slept,” is an introductory dependent clause, so it should be followed by a comma before the main clause. The corrected sentence is “While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie’s ear.” Choice A adds the needed comma without changing the sentence’s meaning.

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