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Replace the needless words with more appropriate choices.

Use Strunk’s advice to make the second half of the sentence parallel.“the economy had changed, there were shifts in the population, and the war ended”“the economy had changed, and there were shifts in the population, and the war had ended”“the economy had changed, the population had shifted, and the war had ended”

The candidates debated as to whether the current policies were appropriate due to the fact that the economy had changed, there were shifts in the population, and the war had ended. Replace the needless words with more appropriate choices. The candidates debated the current policies were appropriate the economy had changed, there were shifts in the population, and the war had ended.

According to Strunk, what is the correct way to punctuate this compound sentence?

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The candidates debated as to whether the current policies were appropriate due to the fact that the economy had changed, there were shifts in the population, and the war had ended. Replace the needless words with more appropriate choices. The candidates debated the current policies were appropriate the economy had changed, there were shifts in the population, and the war had ended.

Use Strunk’s advice to make the second half of the sentence parallel.

According to Strunk, what is the correct way to place an adverbial clause in this sentence?

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