Using Resources and Reference Materials for Editing Answers

Which of the following revisions did you include while rewriting the passage? Check any of the boxes that apply.I removed the dangling preposition.I removed the gendered pronoun.I made the listed items parallel.I added the Oxford comma.I added sentence variety.I changed the passive voice to active voice.

Compare your revisions to the model paragraph by completing the following sentence. I made of the same revisions.