Read the sentence. I told them how surprised and excited I was to have my painting selected, especially since I’d felt so incompetent at the beginning and I knew the competition was so ruthless. Which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence?
Which sentences feature a first-person point of view? Choose three correct answers.
Read the passage from the end of a narrative essay. Student Work When I talk about the experience now, I have mixed emotions. On the one hand, I’m envious of how simple life was before the accident. But on the other, I’ve grown so much as a result of everything that happened that, in an odd way, I’m grateful. The most likely reason this passage was included at the end of the narrative is because the narrator is
Read the paragraph from Sora’s narrative essay. Student Work That day after practice, I was frustrated and stomped home. In fact, I’m embarrassed to say I sulked for the rest of the day. Then my stubborn streak kicked in, and I decided that failure wasn’t an option. I practiced regularly until the day came when I was able to consistently hit the ball. Which sentence from the paragraph best supports the idea that this paragraph belongs in the middle of Sora’s essay?
Read the paragraph that Lukas is planning to include in his narrative essay. Student Work Running is my life. Beginning last summer I practiced every day from the early break of dawn until the heat of the midday sun forced me to take a break. Sipping from my bottle of icy water to keep myself hydrated, I dreamed about running a mile in under ten minutes to compete in the statewide race. What should Lukas do with this paragraph?
One advantage of using dialogue in a narrative essay is to
Read the passage that Gabriel wrote for his narrative essay. Student Work Once we arrived at the local pool, I looked around to see who else was there. Normally, I would have found the kids frolicking and splashing in the water hilarious, but not today. They were cute, but the fact that they were half my age and swimming around like so many ducks just made me feel worse. "You nervous?” my mom asked. I swallowed the lump in my throat. "Not really,” I mumbled, trying to hide my shaking hands in my pockets. I don’t think I fooled my mom, but she didn’t comment on the fact that I looked a little green. Instead, she tried to encourage me, saying, "Well, I think it’s really impressive that you’re going to confront your fear of water and learn to swim.” What is the most likely reason Gabriel chose to write his essay with this point of view?
Read the paragraph from Viktoria’s narrative essay. Student Work As I read the rules, I became even more nervous. Fifty artists had been accepted to the competition. Each artist would have just three hours to create a painting. The topic of the painting would be revealed right before the artists would be allowed to start, so there was no chance I could brainstorm ideas ahead of time. Why would Viktoria most likely include this paragraph in the middle of her essay?
When planning his narrative essay, should Noam include a section about how his experience affected him?
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