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Writing a Narrative about Overcoming a Challenge

Question 7 • AZ-English Language Arts 9 A-CR

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

Answer
A
We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.
B
We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.
C
We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.
D
We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

Explanation

“There” does not tell the reader where the stairs lead, so the destination is unclear. The other sentences give more specific settings or actions, such as a blooming forest, a high school gym, or a track. Therefore, sentence C most needs revision for vagueness.

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