Read the paraphrase of the story Henrique wrote.The soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the canyon. They’d been traveling for days to reach the dragon’s lair. Finally they arrived. Then the dragon approached, and it roared. Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite the noise.
Answer
A
Henrique needs to change the sequence of events to be in a logical order.
B
Henrique needs to add some descriptive language to make the story come alive.
C
Henrique needs to add some dialogue to make the point of view consistent.
D
Henrique needs to change the point of view to make the sequence clearer.
Explanation
The events are already in a logical order: the soldiers travel to the lair, arrive, and then confront the dragon. The narration also stays consistently in third person. Adding vivid details about the rain, canyon, or dragon’s roar would make the scene more engaging, so the best choice is to add descriptive language.
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