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Writing a Narrative Application Essay — Quiz

Question 10 • Senior English

Which sentence makes the best use of descriptive language?

Answer
A
Tara wanted a job so she could save enough money to buy a new bike.
B
The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep.
C
In the morning, it was windy enough to fly the kite Johnny had purchased.
D
Malia grabbed her suitcase and purse and headed to the nearby airport.

Explanation

The sentence “The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep” uses vivid sensory details. “Piercing squeal” helps the reader imagine the sharp sound, and “startled ... from a deep sleep” shows its effect. The other sentences mostly state actions or facts without similarly vivid description.

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