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Writing a Narrative Essay about Being Judged — Quiz

Question 1 • World Literature CR SUSD (EX)

Which sentence should be revised to include vivid imagery?

Answer
A
Pungent sweat dribbled into Jana's eyes as she ran, making them sting and itch.
B
The walnut clock's little brass pendulum gleamed, flicking back and forth with each second.
C
She opened the curtain and looked through the window before shutting it immediately.
D
"I am never using red paint again," Shula muttered, slapping a sixth, streaky coat onto the wall.

Explanation

Choices A, B, and C already use vivid sensory details: streaky paint, pungent sweat that stings and itches, and a gleaming pendulum flicking back and forth. Choice D simply lists actions without helping the reader picture or sense them. It should be revised to include more descriptive imagery.

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