Writing a Narrative Essay about Being Judged

Question 1

Which statement best revises the underlined sentence by adding vivid imagery?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

The multitude of blue stars, imprinted with gold lettering, resembled a sky of silent wishes.

Question 2

Revise the sentences by replacing the underlined phrases with those using strong, active verbs.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

I was crossing the blacktop toward the school as the buses were pulling in .: I crossed; I was crossing the blacktop toward the school as the buses were pulling in .: slowly approached the curb; I was embarrassed and I looked around for somewhere to hide, but there was nowhere to go .: My face flushed bright red; I was embarrassed and I looked around for somewhere to hide, but there was nowhere to go .: the crowd blocked my escape

Question 3

✔ slowly approached the curbare dropping kids offwere arriving

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ slowly approached the curb

Question 4

✔ My face flushed bright redMy face was bright redI was about to cry

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ My face flushed bright red

Question 5

there is no safe placethere are people all around✔ the crowd blocked my escape

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ the crowd blocked my escape

Question 6

Which sentence best uses reflection to conclude the essay?

Revolt · Accepted Answer

This situation made me think about how I had judged others and how it felt to be judged.

Question 7

Revise the sentences by replacing the underlined phrases with those using strong, active verbs.

Revolt · Accepted Answer

✔ I crossed; I was crossing the blacktop toward the school as the buses were pulling in .: I crossed; I was crossing the blacktop toward the school as the buses were pulling in .: slowly approached the curb; I was embarrassed and I looked around for somewhere to hide, but there was nowhere to go .: My face flushed bright red; I was embarrassed and I looked around for somewhere to hide, but there was nowhere to go .: the crowd blocked my escape

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