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Writing a Personal Narrative that Expresses Your Identity

Question 3 • SS-English Language Arts 7

Which sentence uses engaging details to tell a story?

Answer
A
I could tell my brother was proud of me when I won the race.
B
My brother’s warm smile and firm hug showed me how proud he was when I won the race.
C
My brother was definitely proud of me when I won the race.
D
After I finished the race and won first place, my brother told me that he was proud of me.

Explanation

Choice B uses vivid, specific details—the “warm smile” and “firm hug”—to show the brother’s pride. These details help the reader picture the moment and make the story more engaging. The other choices tell us that he was proud, but they use less descriptive language.

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