Writing a Research-Based Argumentative Essay about Technology

Question 2 • S1S: English 9B (E2112 - AG)

Which sentence provides the most beneficial feedback for a writer?

Answer

The last paragraph does not seem to line up with your first paragraph.

The last paragraph isn’t a strong conclusion, and you need to change it.

Instead of restating your thesis in the conclusion, reword it in a new, interesting way.

I just don’t get how the last paragraph relates to the rest of the essay. I’m like, what’s the point?

Explanation

The most beneficial feedback is specific and gives the writer a constructive way to improve. Choice C explains what is not working—simply restating the thesis—and suggests a clear revision: reword the thesis in a new, interesting way. The other choices are vague, judgmental, or do not offer a practical next step.

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