Writing a Research-Based Informative Essay about the Benefits of Humor
Question 2 • CA-Common Core English Language Arts 10 A
Which response gives more effective feedback?You should change the setting from a city in the present to a farm in the past.You need to give the main character more lines of dialogue.I don’t like stories that don’t answer all my questions.I was left wondering why the main character chose not to go home at the end.
Answer
A
You should change the setting from a city in the present to a farm in the past.
B
You need to give the main character more lines of dialogue.
C
I don’t like stories that don’t answer all my questions.
D
I was left wondering why the main character chose not to go home at the end.
Explanation
Effective feedback describes a specific reaction to the story and identifies something the writer could clarify. Choice D explains that the ending left the reader wondering why the character did not go home, pointing to a particular moment and an unanswered question. The other choices either prescribe broad changes or focus on the reader’s general preferences rather than explaining a specific response.
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