Lewis wrote an informational academic paper about deer. He rereads his work and is starting to revise for academic voice. Which sentence needs to be revised for an academic voice?

Academic writing should use a formal, objective tone rather than casual personal opinion. “I just don’t buy it” is conversational and subjective, so sentence C needs revision. It could be rewritten as “Some people believe deer can be tamed, but evidence suggests this is difficult.”

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