Where do teenagers get all the money they need to make purchases? I noticed several new stores had opened up at the local mall. Most of these new stores focused on teenage and young consumers. Yesterday I went shopping.This paragraph lacks

The paragraph lacks organization because its ideas do not follow a clear sequence. It begins by asking where teenagers get money, shifts to new stores at the mall, and ends with “Yesterday I went shopping” without explaining how that connects to the opening question. The missing element is organization, not proper conventions, since the sentences are grammatically understandable.

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