Writing Workshop: An Argumentative Essay about Economic Systems
Question 7 • CA-World History, Culture, and Geography A
Read the body paragraphs of an argumentative essay.National parks are totally important in the economy. Each park creates opportunities for tourism. Millions of visitors travel to national parks. For example, almost 3.5 million visitors went to Yellowstone Park in Wyoming in 2012. These visitors need tons of services, which creates job opportunities for local residents. So, it’s obvious that national parks play an important role in the economy.
Answer
A
The writer could make the tone more academic.
B
The writer could make the tone more informal.
C
The writer could change viewpoints on the topic.
D
The writer could include more transitions.
Explanation
Words and phrases such as “totally important,” “tons of services,” and “it’s obvious” sound informal. Replacing them with more precise, formal language would make the essay’s tone more academic. The choice to make the tone more academic best addresses this issue.
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