Writing Workshop: Effective Professional Communication
Question 7 • IN-English Language Arts 11 B Credit Recovery
Read the excerpt from Jackson’s letter to his principal about starting a new club at his school.(1) I have talked to twelve of my fellow students who are also interested in forming a photography club. (2) Also, Ms. Gonzales told me that she might want to help out. Which is the best revision of sentence 2?
Answer
A
Also, Ms. Gonzales told some people that she wants to be part of the club.
B
Also, Ms. Gonzales let me know that she thinks this is a good idea.
C
In addition, Ms. Gonzales said that she likes taking pictures, too.
D
In addition, Ms. Gonzales has expressed interest in being our teacher advisor.
Explanation
The letter is about starting a photography club, so the revision should clarify how Ms. Gonzales might help. “In addition” is a formal transition, and “being our teacher advisor” explains the kind of help she may provide. The other choices change the meaning by saying she wants to join the club, merely supports the idea, or likes taking pictures.
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