Read the revised introduction of an informative essay.During the Neolithic Revolution, irrigation was introduced, which produced larger crop yields, allowing people to store a surplus of food.Which best explains why the revision is effective?

The introduction gives specific information about the Neolithic Revolution: irrigation led to larger crop yields, which made it possible to store surplus food. These connected details and facts explain the topic rather than stating a personal viewpoint or simply telling readers what to remember. Therefore, the revision is effective because it includes details and facts.

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