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Which of the following is a sentence fragment?

A
Marina is a fast runner and a skilled basketball player.
B
Marina, an excellent basketball player.
C
Marina has very strong basketball skills.
D
Marina, a great basketball player, scored 26 points today.
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Read the sentences.[1] Sameer took a deep breath, straightened his tie, and turned the doorknob. [2] Despite his nerves he was ready for his first interview and had thought through each potential question. Which is the best way to rewrite sentence 2?

A
Despite his nerves he was ready for his first interview although he had thought through each potential question.
B
Despite his nerves; he was ready for his first interview, and had thought through each potential question.
C
Despite his nerves he was ready for his first interview, had thought through each potential question.
D
Despite his nerves, he was ready for his first interview; he had thought through each potential question.
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Which of the following is a sentence fragment?

A
Barack Obama won the presidential election in 2008 and was inaugurated in 2009.
B
Inaugurated in 2009, Barack Obama had won the presidential election in 2008.
C
Barack Obama, who won the presidential election in 2008 and was inaugurated in 2009.
D
In 2008, Barack Obama was elected, and he was inaugurated in 2009.
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A
sentence fragment
B
fused sentence
C
simple sentence
D
comma splice
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Which of the following is written correctly?

A
In June 1776, Thomas Jefferson wrote the first draft of the Declaration of Independence, and it was formally adopted by Congress on July 4 of that year.
B
In June 1776, Thomas Jefferson wrote the first draft of the Declaration of Independence, it was formally adopted by Congress on July 4 of that year.
C
In June 1776, Thomas Jefferson wrote the first draft of the Declaration of Independence that was formally adopted by Congress on July 4 of that year.
D
In June 1776, Thomas Jefferson wrote the first draft of the Declaration of Independence, it was formally adopted by Congress; on July 4 of that year.
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Read the paragraph.[1] Thomas Jefferson was the primary author of the Declaration of Independence. [2] Jefferson began writing in early June of 1776, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft. [3] The delegates of the Second Continental Congress reviewed the document during the last week of June.Which is the best way to revise sentence 2 to improve sentence variety in the paragraph?

A
In early June 1776, Jefferson began writing, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft.
B
Jefferson, who began writing in early June 1776, took three weeks to finish the first draft.
C
The first draft, which Jefferson began writing in early June 1776, took him three weeks.
D
Jefferson took three weeks to finish the first draft, which he began writing in early June 1776.
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Read the paragraph.[1] Cory tried out for his school play, Rumors, by Neil Simon. [2] Cory got the part of “Ken.” [3] Cory attended rehearsal every day after school, and he practiced his lines every night. [4] Cory was fantastic on opening night. [5] Cory made the audience laugh!Why does this paragraph lack sentence variety?

A
Each sentence begins with the subject.
B
Each sentence begins with a dependent clause.
C
Each sentence begins with a prepositional phrase.
D
Each sentence begins with the predicate.
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Read the sentences.[1] Thomas Paine’s Common Sense was published in 1776. [2] The Revolutionary war began that same year. Which is the best way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

A
Thomas Paine’s Common Sense was published in 1776, but the Revolutionary War began that same year.
B
Thomas Paine’s Common Sense was published in 1776, and the Revolutionary War began that same year.
C
Thomas Paine’s Common Sense was published in 1776, when the Revolutionary War began that same year.
D
Thomas Paine’s Common Sense was published in 1776, once the Revolutionary War began that same year.
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Which of the following is a sentence fragment?

A
Marina is a fast runner and a skilled basketball player.
B
Marina, an excellent basketball player.
C
Marina has very strong basketball skills.
D
Marina, a great basketball player, scored 26 points today.
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Read the sentences.[1] I am interested in history. [2] I decided to read the Declaration of Independence. Which of the following options shows the best revisions of sentences 1 and 2 to create sentence variety without combining the sentences?

A
I decided to read the Declaration of Independence. I am quite interested in history.
B
I am interested in the Declaration of Independence. I decided to study history.
C
History interests me. I decided to read the Declaration of Independence.
D
History interests me. The Declaration of Independence is something I decided to read.
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Read the excerpt from The Crisis, Number II, by Thomas Paine.“The character you appear to us in, is truly ridiculous. Your friends, the Tories, announced your coming, with high descriptions of your unlimited powers; but your proclamation has given them the lie, by showing you to be a commissioner without authority. Had your powers been ever so great they were nothing to us, further than we pleased; because we had the same right which other nations had, to do what we thought was best. ‘The UNITED STATES of AMERICA,’ will sound as pompously in the world or in history, as ‘the kingdom of Great Britain’; the character of General Washington will fill a page with as much lustre as that of Lord Howe: and the Congress have as much right to command the king and Parliament in London to desist from legislation, as they or you have to command the Congress. Only suppose how laughable such an edict would appear from us, and then, in that merry mood, do but turn the tables upon yourself, and you will see how your proclamation is received here.”Which statement best describes this excerpt?

A
It contains sentences with varied structures.
B
It contains sentences with similar structures.
C
It contains mostly run-on sentences.
D
It contains fused sentences and comma splices.
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Read the paragraph.Salvador Dalí, born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech. In Figueras, Spain in 1904. He was a Surrealist painter and printmaker; some of his most notable works explore subconscious imagery. In fact, he was profoundly influenced by the writings of Sigmund Freud. An Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis. Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?

A
Correct the run-on sentences.
B
Correct the fused sentences.
C
Correct the comma splices.
D
Correct the sentence fragments.
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Read the information below.ØErin enjoys dancingØErin’s favorite dance is the Lindy HopWhich is the best way to combine this information into a grammatically correct sentence?

A
Erin enjoys dancing, and her favorite dance is the Lindy Hop.
B
Erin enjoys dancing, her favorite dance is the Lindy Hop.
C
Erin, who enjoys dancing, her favorite dance is the Lindy Hop.
D
Erin, enjoys dancing and her favorite dance is the Lindy Hop.
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A
sentence fragment
B
fused sentence
C
simple sentence
D
comma splice
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Read the sentences. There were five original Iroquois Nations. In the early 1700s, the Tuscarora joined the Confederacy as the sixth. Which is the best way to combine these two sentences?

A
There were five original Iroquois Nations, in the early 1700s, the Tuscarora joined the Confederacy as the sixth.
B
There were five original Iroquois Nations; in the early 1700s, the Tuscarora joined the Confederacy as the sixth.
C
There were five original Iroquois Nations in the early 1700s because the Tuscarora joined the Confederacy as the sixth.
D
There were five original Iroquois Nations, in the early 1700s the Tuscarora; joined the Confederacy as the sixth.
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Read the paragraph.[1] Thomas Jefferson was the primary author of the Declaration of Independence. [2] Jefferson began writing in early June of 1776, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft. [3] The delegates of the Second Continental Congress reviewed the document during the last week of June.Which is the best way to revise sentence 2 to improve sentence variety in the paragraph?

A
In early June 1776, Jefferson began writing, and he took three weeks to finish the first draft.
B
Jefferson, who began writing in early June 1776, took three weeks to finish the first draft.
C
The first draft, which Jefferson began writing in early June 1776, took him three weeks.
D
Jefferson took three weeks to finish the first draft, which he began writing in early June 1776.

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