Read the sentence from an informative essay about globalization in China.Pollution levels in Beijing are improving in some ways thanks to government programs.The sentence needs to be revised because it lacks detail and factual support about

The sentence says pollution is improving “thanks to government programs,” but it does not identify or describe those programs or provide evidence that they caused the improvement. Adding details about the programs would make that claim more specific and supported. The sentence already identifies Beijing as the location, so it does not mainly lack detail about pollution levels in China as a whole.

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