Read the following paragraph.The “Read Books, Share the Love” advertisement effectively convinces people to read more books. The advertisement targets parents of young children. In the ad, a mother and father are reading a book to their two young children. Most parents certainly would want their children to do well academically. This ad effectively encourages literacy. Which of the following revisions would most improve this paragraph?
Answer
A
correcting punctuation and spelling errors
B
better explaining the target audience
C
discussing techniques used in the ad
D
reorganizing the order of the content
Explanation
The paragraph identifies the audience and describes the family shown, but it does not explain how the advertisement persuades that audience. Adding discussion of techniques—such as the image of parents reading with their children and its appeal to parents’ hopes for their children’s success—would make the analysis more convincing. The best revision is to discuss techniques used in the ad.
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