Read the excerpt. Draft: Gandhi went on a hunger strike for peace. What needs to be added to this draft of the essay’s first sentence to create a more sufficient introduction?

“Gandhi went on a hunger strike for peace” gives only a broad statement. An introduction would be more sufficient if it included relevant supporting details that explain the context, such as when or why Gandhi took the hunger strike. An informal tone or transitions would not add the missing information, and complex topics are not needed.

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