Contested Usage Answers

Which statement best explains why a writer might revise the second sentence to use passive voice rather than active voice?

The usher asked us to carefully proceed to the exit.Carefully the usher asked us to proceed to the exit. No revision is necessary.

She encouraged the dancers to energetically and gracefully perform the routine, also confidently.She encouraged the dancers to perform the routine energetically, gracefully, and confidently.No revision is necessary.

I hope to finish my science project tomorrow.I hope to tomorrow completely finish my science project.No revision is necessary.

lifebelowthe

Which sentence must be revised to eliminate the preposition at the end?

Cassidy does not know for which course she will register.How could a writer best revise the above sentence to avoid overly formal language?

tomyon

Ifacrosstwo