Read a sentence from Ravi's essay.The poem illustrates, through the use of metaphors, that success can only be appreciated by someone who knows failure.Which revision makes Ravi's sentence more concise without losing its precision?

Replacing “through the use of metaphors” with “through metaphors” removes unnecessary words while keeping the detail that the poem uses metaphors. The revised sentence remains precise: it still explains how the poem illustrates its idea.

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