Read Luca's sentence.Daniel seems to excel effortlessly in sports, sinking three-point shots with ease, Andrés must work tirelessly to achieve even minor victories.Which revision corrects an error?

The sentence contains two complete thoughts joined only by a comma, which creates a comma splice. Adding “While” makes the first thought dependent and shows the contrast with Andrés’s effort, so the sentence is correctly joined. “Three-point” is properly hyphenated, and “victories” is spelled correctly.

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